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{"code":o,"data":{"bookInfo":{"bookId":1o33839642,"bookname":"Dc新氪星","authorId":2619514,"authorname":"宅家的聪","Id":12,"ame":"轻小说","Url":"2cy.","auditStatus":19,"checkLevel":15,"subcateId":281,"subame":"衍生同人","unitcategoryId":2oo59,"unitSubcategoryId":2oo61,"isVip":o,"bookType":1,"form":etype":1,"totalprieLayout":o,"bookStatus":"连载","signStatus":"签约作品","desc":" 穿越到氪星的骇尔,终于在氪星毁灭前离开氪星,但很不幸,被自己的养父乔-艾尔放逐在深空之中。n茫茫不见生命,冰冷而孤寂,黑暗长存的深空,即使如此,还是我赢了,乔-艾尔。n我会寻找到你,找到你那人间之神的儿子,我那愚蠢的弟弟,那身上藏有氪星一切的生命法典。n我将重建氪星,史无前列,诸天万界最强大的氪星。n《骇尔穿梭万界建立新氪星》Q群:282672918","joinTime":"2o22.o4.29","collect":1257o,"updchapterId":715192347,"updame":"公告","updTime":"2小时前","updchapterUrl":"read.chapterpPRcJZe_xd_ffahp3g1tpg2YYqTzK_q9D5oBDFlr9quQA2","cbid":"23117o673o96364o4","bookLabels":[{"tag":"穿越"}],"bookLabelsTime":165396o4o3,"bookTag":{"tagname":"轻小说","link":"2cy"},"updInfo":[],"chtIorniame":""},"i":{"reable":1,"moEnable":1,"donateEnable":1},"wordst":"1o.58万","clickTotal":-1,"reAll":2539,"reweek":211,"mo":167,"showwordst":"1o.58万","vipclickweek":o,"vipclickAll":o,"tRelated":[],"isSighTic":1},"riskbe":{"be":o,"message":""},"riskInfo":{"banId":o,"banmessage":"","sessionKey":"","captchaAId":"","captchaURL":"","pht":"","ge":"","offlicha":o,"captchaType":o},"fo":{"actualwords":15o,"authorReend":[],"authorSay":"","cbid":23117o673o96364o4,"ccid":6278829o662685573,"chapterId":715192347,"ame":"公告","chapterorder":41696,"cvid":62o56o15382156286,"extra":{"us":o,"prevname":"第39章黑暗","prevVipStatus":o,"volumeBody":true,"volumename":"正文卷","Url":"","preUrl":"read.chapterpPRcJZe_xd_ffahp3g1tpg2aZUQH-mcgclp4rPq4Fd4KQ2"},"fi":o,"freeStatus":o,"modifyTime":16539561o5,"":-1,"ccid":o,"prev":715119o12,"prevccid":62774293498483725,"updateTime":"2o22-o5-31o8:15","uuid":44,"vipStatus":o,"volumeId":1o13o17o8,"wordst":15o,"isFirst":o,"t":"
我翻看评论,看有说语句不通的,认真的想了一下。这应该是我没注意,用白话+普通话写的问题。
我重读了几遍文章的,也注意到一些问题。
趁着书还不是太多章节,我打算全部精修一下,整到语句通顺,合理逻辑化一些人物,丰富人物形象。
今天返修,大概率应该是更新不了。
其实有些懒得再修改。
但我有能力做更好,就没必要将就。","authorwords":{"t":""},"updateTimestamp":16539561o5,"isBuy":o,"limitFree":o,"eFw":o,"ark":"","isPubliode":1,"fEnS":o},"rewardI":2,"todayt":1},"refo":{"weekt":211,"disForward":1,"disBackward":o,"rank":1o21,"totaloInfo":{"montht":161,"disForward":o,"disBackward":o,"rank":5oo2},"checkLevel":15,"isPubliode":1,"hasSubscribe":o,"settings":"","hasLite":false,"bookActReward":{"hitU":o,"subscribec":otF":o},"abInfo":{"abTextGroup":1}},"msg":"成功"}
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